Noor's Pitch Video
Noor's pitch video is a great example of how to cleanly convey a story and start a conversation without needing high budget special effects, or equipment. For more insight into making your Vintro pitch, read our great pitch guidelines.
Al's Review For Noor
Reviews on the Vintro platform consist of reviewers answering 3 questions for about 1 min each. Reviewers can choose to respond either by video or by voice recording.
What did you like from the pitch?
Text Transcript: "Hi there Noor, It's Al here thank you very much for sending your video. First of all, I'd like to congratulate you on all of your energy and passion for the business that you are leading. I really came away with a sense of, 'this is the moment,' and there was huge energy, and there was a big macro pitch about what you're doing at Vintro. I'll be honest with you, I struggled to catch up. It came across that you knew a lot more about it than I did, which is obvious, but I'd love to have that broken down a little more. What exactly is Vintro? What market role is Vintro playing? and whats the ask what do you want from me. That said, the video was more than compelling enough for me to want to learn more so thanks very much for that introduction?"
What issues did you see?
Text transcript: "Hi, again Noor! I'm not sure if it was quite issues that I saw, but it was quite hard for me to put my finger on the economics of the business and also the exact usage of the platform that I could evaluate. I suppose I would have liked to have had a very simple part of your video that said: 'what happens on Vintro is that business founders or entrepreneurs pitch their idea and then people who are interested in investing in entrepreneurs have a choice to review that video and have a choice to either invest or support that entrepreneur on their journey.' So, I think just break it down into that very simple piece. Don't forget that the end of this introduction video, as long as you've got the interest of the investor, you're going to have loads more time to connect with them this is just about that initial connection so the more specific you can be, I think, the better."
What next steps should they take?
Text transcript "Hi, again Noor! The introduction, the energy, and the excitement has definitely got my interest. What I'd love to see now if you'd be kind enough to send it to me, would be a few slides about the business today: where is the business at, a couple of perhaps user journeys, storyboards about how the business is working, and also where you think we can take the business together in the future. I'm certainly interested. It's been great to see your energy and hear the passion you have for the company and I look forward to hearing more from you. I'll send, securely through the Vintro network, my contact details so you can send me a few slides on the specifics of the company and perhaps I can send you back some further questions. Congratulations on a great business idea and I hope you're well. Cheers, bye!"